Sales page copy for business coach Cienna Kopischke
Project summary
Cienna Kopischke is an incredibly inspiring coach who helps women achieve financial freedom without working 24/7. She empowers womenpreneurs and busy mums to get clear on their definition of success and smash their goals.
Cienna is such a kind-hearted person with a deeply moving story. I loved getting to know her and was hugely excited to craft copy encouraging more women to step into her world.
To write clear, persuasive copy for Cienna’s She-thrives Collective sales page that highlights her Christian values and amazing coaching offer.
Once Cienna had worked with me on her Finer Things Story Strategy, I hopped on a connection call with her. The call helped me get more detail on Cienna’s vision so I could amplify the message she wanted her copy to convey.
During the call, Cienna shared a personal, heartfelt story about an awful coaching experience she had years ago. The story helped me understand why Cienna is so passionate about helping women embrace financial freedom on their terms. I knew I had to include it in her copy.
Next, I crafted the actual copy. I won’t bore you with the ins and outs of the writing process, but it involved many cups of tea and several drafts.
Compelling sales page copy that showcases Cienna’s unique coaching perspective and speaks directly to her ideal clients, encouraging them to secure their spot in the She-thrives Collective.
The images below are placeholders and do not belong to the client.
Here’s what Cienna had to say…
Before working with Finer Things Editorial, I felt lost with my lack of understanding of where to start to write website copy that would convert. I was overwhelmed with the entire process and the potential cost. I also felt inadequate in my abilities because a lot of times people ask me for a website and I didn’t have one to give them.
After receiving my copy from Finer Things Editorial, I am finally making progress in my life. The clients I want to see in my business want to visit a website before purchasing from me. I honestly loved how organized this entire process was. I only had to hop on a call once for Charlotte to be capable of delivering beautiful landing page copy.
If you’re considering working with Finer Things Editorial, just do it.
Grow your business in the She-thrives Collective
Achieve financial freedom and enjoy more family time with the coaching experience that has a 98% success rate.
Here's the finished result!
You want to grow your business. But…
You’re spending hours on Upwork, social media, or email marketing and not seeing the results you want.
You’re signing clients you don’t really want to work with because you need the money.
You’re verging on burnout and have no idea how to get your business to the next level.
Can I tell you a not-so-secret secret?
Right now, you’re too close to your business. Your ever-growing to-do list is consuming any mental energy you have left after handling your 9-5, home life, and finances. You’re so busy scheduling social media posts and jumping on calls that you haven’t paused to think, what is this achieving?
It’s time to take a step back, get clear on your big-picture goals, and understand exactly what it takes to get there. You can be the woman who pays off her student loans, buys her parents a house, and enjoys family milestones. Money can flow in without you chaining yourself to your laptop.
Your goals come into reach when you become part of the She-thrives Collective.
The She-thrives Collective: what’s included
As a valued woman entrepreneur in the She-thrives Collective, you’ll have access to:
- A portal with 50+ videos, where I walk you through everything you need to know to scale your business.
- Two live, hands-on training sessions per month in a group Zoom call, where I teach growth strategies and secrets.
- Live support via my Slack channel, where you can ask questions and get to know like-minded women in the supportive She-thrives Collective community.
Investment: $333 per month or $1,998 pay in full (six-month commitment).
Payments start the day you sign the contract.
Say goodbye to burnout
You’ve tried everything to grow your business. You’ve downloaded all the freebies. You’ve gone to all the classes. You’ve put in (too many) long hours. But despite all your efforts, your business doesn’t seem to be going anywhere.
Even worse, you barely have time for your family beyond meals, cleaning, pick-ups, and drop-offs. There are texts from friends you haven’t answered in days. You’re just about managing to eat and sleep enough to keep yourself going. Hobbies? What hobbies?
You’re tired of living paycheck to paycheck and worrying about bills. You’ve tried journaling or meditation to manage your stress, but it keeps coming back. Whenever you try to take a break from it all, you never return feeling fully relaxed.
It’s time to say goodbye to burnout. Your best self doesn’t need this uncertainty and worry.
Fix these challenges with a sales coach who really cares
When you join the She-thrives Collective, I will guide you so you can:
- Reverse the curse of working around the clock while seeing limited progress.
- Spend more guilt-free time at home with your kiddos.
- Nail down your business goals and the steps it will take to achieve them, even if you’re starting with a tight budget.
- Decide where to direct your time and energy so you’re not left feeling unsure where to turn.
- Overcome imposter syndrome and price yourself confidently and clearly.
- Streamline your marketing efforts and get in front of the right people for your business.
- Get confident with your offers and launch new ones only when you know they’ll make an impact.
- Set boundaries so you stop feeling like a slave to your clients.
- Accelerate progress in multiple areas of your business.
And so, so much more.
Whatever problems you bring to the table, I’ll be here, ready to listen and help you come up with a plan to get you through the challenge.
Meet your Christian sales coach and new friend
Hey, I’m Cienna, a Jesus-loving mama, military wife, sales queen, and lover of life.
I don’t want you to feel overwhelmed by all the messages out there saying you should make $1 million within nine months of starting your business. It’s okay to take your time to make sales. You don’t have to hit the $1 million mark to be successful.
Success looks different to everyone. It’s not always about hitting big-money milestones. Your success might mean contributing $5k to your household bills each month while getting to spend afternoons with your children.
I’ll help you pin down what you’d like your success to look like. Then I’ll help you get there.
Been burned in coaching before?
I’ve been there. I know what it’s like to invest in coaching but not see any return. When I was in the early stages of my business, I invested in a big-name coach. Let’s call her Sarah. There were plenty of reasons why I needed Sarah’s help.
I was a brand-new mom. During my pregnancy, I’d been diagnosed with hyperemesis gravidarum, a rare condition that left me severely unwell and in need of hospital treatments.
Being a military family, we had just moved to Virginia, which is hours away from our support network. On top of this, we were facing financial struggles. Often, we didn’t have enough money to buy groceries or put gas in the car to travel to my hospital appointments.
I turned to Sarah, hoping she’d be able to help me grow my business so I could support my family. But I didn’t have the $10k I needed to invest in her program. Sarah convinced me to take out a loan with a 30% interest rate, promising that I would make $10k a month on her program when I invested.
Unfortunately, Sarah only had one strategy to make that money — the same copy-paste approach she gave all her clients. This strategy didn’t work for me, and she wasn’t prepared to help me find a solution that would enable me to scale my business. She removed me from the program, leaving me to handle all these challenges without support — and with an interest-heavy loan to pay off.
I don’t want you to ever have an experience like this. That’s why if I could tell you just one thing, it’d be this:
Don’t hire the celebrity coach whose promises are too good to be true. Find a coach who genuinely cares and wants to see you change your life for the better.
I’ve become that coach for my clients.
Empowering sales coaching for resilient women
The She-thrives Collective is right for you if you’re:
- A woman entrepreneur who has been running her business for up to five years or is still working a full-time job.
- A service provider who is ready to sign more clients without hustling 24/7.
- A busy mom with kiddos up to age five who wants more time with her family and a healthy work-life balance.
The Collective is also going to be a wonderful place for you if you’re:
- Earning $0-$1,500 per month and are ready to increase that to at least $5k per month.
- Not sure how to translate your small actions into a larger plan with a clear objective.
- Ready to get clear on your goals and enjoy financial freedom.
- Looking for a Christian coaching experience that aligns with your values.
- Keen to join a community of like-minded women entrepreneurs and make an impact helping others.
FAQs
So far, 98% of She-thrives Collective members have achieved $5k months. However, in the unlikely event that you fall into the 2% who don’t, I’ll work with at a 50% rate ($166.50 per month) until you are earning $5k a month.
The She-thrives Collective can help you achieve your goals as long as you’re ready to believe in yourself and put in the work.
I’d advise you to invest in coaching when you don’t know which steps to take next to grow your business. Investing in coaching via the She-thrives Collective will help you identify those next steps to land aligned clients and make sales.
Many coaches only care about your money or your business: I care about you. I’m here to serve you, not the other way around. Whether it’s a divorce or financial struggles, I’m often the first person clients reach out to when they’ve got something happening in their personal lives. For this reason, many of my clients have become close friends.
If you and your spouse want your business to grow, joining the She-thrives Collective should be a no-brainer. However, I’m happy to sit in on calls with spouses to handle any objections they might have about you making this investment.
It’s time to thrive
When it comes to supporting my clients, my faith plays a big role: I pray for them, with them, and over them. I’m also not afraid to speak up and tell hard truths. If you’re after a cheerleader and friend who will tell you honestly what it will take to grow your business, that’s me.
Ready to step into your power, embrace financial freedom, and enjoy life?
Still on the fence?
Still unsure if the She-thrives Collective aligns with your needs? I would never pressure you into investing in something that isn’t 100% right for you. Drop me a message if you’d like to chat about whether this coaching program is right for you.
